Writing a Christmas Story: A Guide for Children’s Book Authors

Writing a Christmas Story: A Guide for Children’s Book Authors

Writing a Christmas Story: A Guide for Authors with cartoon Christmas tree

Christmas always brings a little extra magic into the world, and it’s no surprise that many writers dream about writing a Christmas story of their own. If that’s you, you’ll love today’s guest post from G.R. Saunders, a former teacher and lifelong storyteller who beautifully captures the wonder of the season in her book Edgar’s Christmas Wish.

G.R. shares simple, practical tips to help you shape your own holiday story—whether you’re writing for your kids or hoping to publish.

Christmas is that wonderful time of the year when magic seems to abound everywhere. We are bombarded with advertisements of all kinds, showing us the lights and sounds of this most festive of seasons. We see dancing reindeer and polar bears sharing joy and good wishes with each other, trees covered in sparkling ornaments, and lights, elves and Santa Claus.

You may have thought about writing a Christmas story to read to your children, and maybe trying to get it published, too. You would not be alone with that thought. In fact, you might be surprised at how many famous authors have also written a Christmas book!

A few things you might want to consider: Christmas stories run the gamut from very serious to a complete frolic.

If you are writing for an adult audience, you can write about anything from wartime Christmas stories to nostalgic memories of childhood days, and almost anything else. Many magazines are always on the lookout for feel-good stories of “the good old days” that they feature in their holiday issues.

However, if you want to write a children’s Christmas book, there are a few things you need to know.

TIP #1: Decide the Age Level of Your Christmas Story 

First, you need to be certain what grade level you are writing for. There is a huge gap between age groups as children grow. Picture books, which are very popular, are usually designed to be read aloud by a grownup, while chapter books are aimed at older children able to read for themselves. If you want to get your children’s book published, you need to be very clear which group you are writing for.

There are six categories of children’s books. They are:

Board books – Average age is from ages 0-to-3

Picture books – Average age is from ages 3-to-8

Early readers – Average age is from ages 5-to-8

Chapter books – Average age is roughly 6-to-10

Middle grade novels – Average age is roughly 8-to-12

YA (or young adult) novels – Average age is roughly 12-to-18

TIP #2: Know Word Counts for Children’s Christmas Books

Word count is critical for writing a children’s book. You may have the best story idea ever thought of, but if your word count is too high, you will need to cut it down to fit the category you are aiming for.

If you look at children’s books that are already out there, you will notice that some of them may only have one or two words on an entire page! Here are some other typical word counts:

Board books – 0-to-100 words maximum

Picture books – Typically 500 words, maximum 1,000 words

Early readers – Typically 1,000-to-2,500 words

Chapter books – Commonly 4,000-to-15,000 words

Middle grade novels  – Commonly 25,000-to-50,000 words (sometimes 60,000+)

YA novels – Commonly 50,000-to-90,000+ words depending on genre

TIP #3: Choose a Unique Angle When Writing a Christmas Story

Now, what will you write about?

Christmas magic is all-powerful in most children’s books. This is a time when even the thought of reindeer that fly is perfectly acceptable. With that in mind, you want to present a different take on such holiday themes. This is important because there is a LOT of competition. How can you make YOUR story stand out from all the others out there? Think about an elf’s Christmas experience.

Hermey the elf with RudolphRemember Hermey, the elf who really wants to be a dentist instead of a toymaker? We remember Hermey because we can all relate to having a dream that may or may not come true. Hermey’s struggle draws us in and makes us care about him, even if he is a fictitious character.

In my Christmas children’s book, “Edgar’s Christmas Wish,” the main character is a tree who wants more than anything to be a Christmas tree and celebrate the holiday with a family. Edgar is very aware that he is not as tall as the other trees, and he hopes he will be chosen, anyway. Children can identify with Edgar because his situation is like hoping to be chosen for a sports team at school. This element makes Edgar’s story stand out from other stories about Christmas.

TIP #4: Lessons You Can Learn From Popular Christmas Books

Study popular titles in your category. Take the time to visit the “kid lit” section of your local library or bookstore to see what is already out there. Is there a place where your book would fit?

If you are writing a picture book, you can look at one of the versions of the classic “The Night Before Christmas” by Clement Moore. Even though it was first published in 1823, this familiar Christmas tale still sells copies, year after year.

If you want a more serious tone, check out Truman Capote’s “A Christmas Memory,” a nonfiction account of a boy’s Christmas with a beloved elderly cousin during the Great Depression.

If you're interested in writing a Christmas story, The Christmas Owl is a good example to study.A more modern nonfiction story is “The Christmas Owl” by Gideon Sterer and Ellen Kalish. This is the true story of a little owl who was trapped in the bindings of a tree selected for the Rockefeller Center in New York City and would especially appeal to children interested in the natural world.

And from across the pond, check out the nostalgic “An Irish Country Christmas” by the beloved Irish writer Alice Taylor. This novel would be a wonderful read-aloud selection for older children.

If you are looking for simple, joyful frolic of a book, look no further than “Snowmen at Night” by Carolyn Buehner.

TIP #5: Understanding the Role of Illustrations in Picture Books

A word about illustrations.

Thinking about “Snowmen at Night” brings up something absolutely critical to any children’s book–illustrations.

This is one area that is completely different from novel writing. With a novel, you need to be concerned with an appealing cover and back blurb. With a children’s book, you need to think about illustrations throughout the book. If you are writing a picture book, you will need an illustration on every page. Every Single Page.

Today’s picture books are not like in the old days, when an illustration was on one page, and the story text was on the other. Modern picture books have illustrations on every page, combined with the text. This requires some critical planning as to where to position the text, so it works with the illustrations. This means that sometimes the text should appear at the top of a page, sometimes on the bottom, or anywhere else where it would fit with the illustration. You may need to enlist the talents of a layout artist to help with this.

With all of this to think about, one more thing you must consider: Unless you are a gifted artist, it would be wise to hire a professional illustrator/graphic artist if you are self-publishing. If you are working with an established publishing house, they will match you with an artist of their choosing.

You need to remember this cardinal rule of children’s books: Your illustrations can make or break the success of your book!

I’m sure we have all seen children’s books that had a great story, but the cover and illustrations screamed “amateur!” If you are writing for friends and family and/or a local audience, this may not be a problem, but if you want your book to be competitive with books in bookstores and libraries, a poorly done cover and illustrations will practically guarantee that your book will be passed over in favor of another with artwork that grabs attention.

Let’s use “Snowmen at Night” as an example.

Snowmen at Night Seasonal children's storyStarting with the cover, the “double life” of snowmen is suggested by a daytime view of snowmen standing in front of houses, but the bottom half of the cover suggests that these same snowmen have a secret life after dark.

This theme is perfectly continued inside the book, wherein the ordinary daytime snowmen are transformed after dark into happy beings that frolic down the street into the park, meet and play games and go sledding with other snowmen, and then drag themselves back home before the sun comes up the next day.

You will notice that the text varies throughout the book, even cascading downhill with snowmen sledding down the hill on their sleds. The bright, cheerful colors, happy illustrations, and expressive faces of the snowmen completely support the story.

That’s what you want–all parts of the book work together to form a complete story experience for your readers.

Final Thoughts: Why Writing a Christmas Story Matters More Than Ever

You may have concluded from reading all of this that writing for children is a whole lot of trouble, and maybe it is. But what an important work it is!

Some writers may think that writing stories for children is beneath them, but I beg to differ. Of course, it is grand to think of writing the “Great American Novel”, and yes, it is.

While it is also wonderful to write history, biographies, romance (who doesn’t love a good love story?), think for a moment of the impact a good child’s book has on helping to form the child into a future adult.

Think of children’s stories as cultural builders for children that reinforce the values of society. Children’s books can help parents and teachers show children the importance of such ideas as kindness, sharing, or patience, not by lecturing the child, but by letting the child see for himself/herself these qualities through a story. That is why these ideas stay with a child and become part of who he/she grows up to be. Think of the lesson of “The Little Engine That Could” which reinforces the idea that “I think I can, I think I can, I know I can…”

So, if you have dreams of writing for children, go for it! A noble calling indeed.

I wish you luck.

GR Saunders with her Christmas story, Edgar's Christmas Wish.

About the Author

G.R. Saunders is a former teacher who grew up in a house filled with books and music. She has been reading and writing stories since she was a child. She believes that childhood should be a special time filled with wonder, discovery, and learning; a time for dreaming and enjoying the world of imagination; where animals can talk, sing and dance. A time for hopes and dreams.

In addition to writing, she enjoys sewing and design, knitting, and traveling. She is also active in animal welfare causes. She would love to hear from you!

Visit her website.

You can also follow her on Facebook.

Cover of Edgar's Christmas Wish, a Christmas story about a little evergreen tree with an enormous dream.

About Edgar’s Christmas Wish

Meet Edgar, the little tree with a big heart! Edgar’s greatest wish is to become a Christmas tree and celebrate Christmas with a family.

Will he ever see his wish come true?

In this classic Christmas story for children of all ages, Edgar must learn that Christmas is more than magic or fancy decorations and lights. It’s a simple beauty that shines from the inside out. It’s all about love, and love comes from the heart.

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If you’re looking for more holiday-themed inspiration, you might enjoy my children’s book The Flag Keeper, a patriotic story that’s perfect for teaching kids about respect and responsibility around national holidays.

Also check out this article on 5 tips for writing a children’s picture book.

 

 

 

Kickstarter For Authors Picture Book Campaign

Kickstarter For Authors Picture Book Campaign

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Kickstarter for authors. It’s a popular topic these days, but creating a Kickstarter campaign for your book can seem like an intimidating task. Luckily, we have Gina Soldano-Herrle visiting the blog today and sharing a behind-the-scenes glimpse into the Kickstarter campaign for her children’s picture book, Nia’s Rescue Box.

It all started with some moldy strawberries, or maybe they were blueberries. At Vindeket Foods, where I worked as a service participant (like a volunteer) every Tuesday night, I started telling myself stories.

Why A Food Rescue Picture Book?

Vindeket Foods is a food rescue and unlike any place I’ve ever been. It’s not just about any one thing; it’s much much more. So, I decided I’d combine it with my other passion, writing.

I wrote Nia’s Rescue Box in fall 2022 and queried for a minute before I decided to publish the picture book myself. With the encouragement of Vindeket’s founder and community support, I ran a Kickstarter the next spring so I could bring Nia’s story to life and share Vindeket’s philosophy with the world.

I could go on all day about their mission, but it’s basically about revaluing food and people providing a dual purpose solution that solves food waste and food insecurity in communities.

Kickstarters For Authors Done Well

There are A LOT of Kickstarters out there and many of them are done well. Below are a few that I’ve noticed, followed, or learned about that I think are examples of utilizing the platform well.

1. Rachael Herron’s Unstuck: An Audacious Hunt for Home and Happiness. Funded within a day at over 300% of target goal.

2. Joanna Penn’s Writing the Shadow: Turn Your Inner Darkness into Words. Funded at 729% of target goal.

3. Alice Oseman’s Heartstopper: Volume One. Funded at 655% of target goal.

Pre-Campaign Marketing For Kickstarter Books

This is the number one thing you can do to get your campaign up and off the ground. By marketing before you need any actual money, people will hear about your project with time to decide if they want to back it or not. And if not, they still might share it with a friend, coworker, or relative who could turn into a backer.

Pre-campaign marketing comes in a variety of ways. It could be webinars, social media posts, blogs, interviews, and more. Your focus will be determined by you, your project, and your target audience. No matter what your focus is, create your Kickstarter page as soon as you can.

The pages are editable and you can change the launch date as many times as you like before going live with the campaign. Once backers have picked certain rewards is when you need to stick to deadlines. Try to get your page published at least a week but up to a month in advance. Kickstarter has the option to “follow” a project. This lets you email potential backers to let them know your campaign is live. Also, having followers appears to help with the site’s algorithm.

Publicity For Kickstarter Author Campaigns

You know more than you think you know. For my own campaign, I was anxious about reaching out to people to publicize the project. I did what I could, but I know I could have reached out to way more networks than I did (think college, high school, home town, family, special interest groups).

I contacted some local news stations and was interviewed by a local paper. Other than that, I relied on grassroots support and my immediate networks through social media. Research who would be interested in your book, then reach out to those individuals, organizations, and news outlets to let as many people as you can know about your project. They can’t back it if they don’t know about it.

Community And Grassroots Support

Do NOT underestimate this powerful force. Community support is one of the biggest keys to having a successful Kickstarter.The campaign examples I mentioned above all had strong bases of support through readers, clients, and fans.

But, don’t worry. You don’t need to be famous to fund your book through Kickstarter. What is priceless are true fans.

Know the individuals who support your work. Reach out to your target audience. If you have a community-based project (like mine), let your community know exactly what you’re trying to do and what the rewards are for backing the project.

Rewards For Kickstarter Backers

Rewards can be tricky to figure out and I know now that I made a million mistakes. Lean into what you can offer that is a high ticket item and get people excited about it.

That could be “Ask Me Anything” calls in your subject of expertise. It could be a writing retreat, hiking retreat, meditation retreat, or online event. Offer classroom visits, guest speaker spots, special editions (Joanna Penn really nailed this one), whatever you can do that will be worth a backer’s dollar and fund your project.

Platform For Kickstarter Authors

You don’t need to have a huge platform, but you want people to be able to find you. Build that excitement like I said above before you launch your campaign. If your project doesn’t fund in time for your goal, you get $0. The stakes can feel impossible sometimes, but each campaign is a learning experience and you can always try again.

Although, you might as well take the time to do everything you can. It’d be way more exciting to hit your goal the first time, right? Use your platform on social media, email lists, and in local specialty organizations to build support and keep your project top of mind.

Updates And What Comes Next

Once your campaign funds (and even before), you’ll want to put out updates. For me, my first update went out when I decided on an illustrator and shared her first design. Updates can be once you have a cover or find a printer. Look at the examples above (all updates are visible to the public) for further inspiration.

You can also publish updates when timelines change. I originally told backers I’d publish in July 2023, but that changed to November 2023 because of a variety of factors. Don’t be afraid to be honest. Be human. The updates are also a great way to keep your project in front of people even well after it’s funded. You want to keep selling your book beyond the preorder, don’t you?

Keep updates coming as long as is reasonable or expected for backers and at least until they receive your book in their hands.

About The Author

Gina Soldano-Herrle is a professional core story consultant, ghostwriter, and author. She’s an active member of SCBWI (Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators) and was recently awarded a 12×12 Picture Book Challenge scholarship for 2024. Her debut picture book, Nia’s Rescue Box is available at most online booksellers. You can also listen to recent author interviews about “Why We Write” on her website or your favorite podcast platform.

Hot tip: Listen to Gina interview Stacy on this episode.

Why we write

About The Book

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Ashamed of her newfound food insecurity, Nia leaves the local food rescue with an empty box. Afterward, when confronted with the reality of food waste, she reconsiders accepting help and becoming a part of something greater. In this picture book, children learn about food rescues, food waste, food insecurity, and what they can do about it.

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5 Tips For Writing A Children’s Picture Book

5 Tips For Writing A Children’s Picture Book

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Have you ever considered writing a children’s picture book? Because children’s picture books are so short, it can be challenging to tell your story effectively. You have limited space, need to use an age-appropriate vocabulary, and your words have to inspire an illustrator to create vivid pictures. Some writers make it look easy, like A.L. Wegwerth, author of I’m Going to Be a Hockey Star. But writing a picture book is a complex undertaking that takes special skill. Fortunately, A.L. Wegwerth has stopped by to share five of her top tips for aspiring picture book writers. Read her tips below.

I write this as an avid picture book reader as well as a picture book author. I’ve also worked in children’s publishing for over fifteen years so I have an inside perspective that tends toward practical, and for that reason this advice may resonate with some people and not with others.

Without further ado, here are five quick tips for aspiring picture book writers.

Tip #1: Read, Then Write.

If you want to write a picture book, make sure you read picture books. Lots of them. The quality of picture books produced gets better every year. Soak in each book’s wisdom, its innovation or its simplicity. Figure out which authors resonate with you and why. Reading widely also has the added benefit of helping you better understand the picture book market in terms of what gets published and potential comps for your book. I can’t emphasize enough that if you have a goal of getting your book traditionally published, there needs to be a perceived audience for your book. Which brings me to my next point . . .

Tip #2: Consider Your Audience.

A picture book has two audiences: the child and the parent whose lap the child sits on. Make sure your story has elements that appeal to both. It not only makes bedtime or story time more enjoyable for the parents, but I truly believe it affects your book sales. People are more likely to purchase a book as a gift or recommend it to others if they found it enjoyable (and not just their kid).

Tip #3: Choose Your Words Carefully.

A picture book is a collaboration between an author and illustrator. Make sure your words leave space for the illustrator to tell the story. As a picture book writer, focus on action and dialogue and avoid descriptions unless they are vital to the story (the illustrator can take care of that.) Picture books are great ways to build kids’ visual literacy (i.e., the ability to read and make sense of visual images). The words and art work together to tell a story; when the words repeat what is in the illustrations, the story becomes redundant.

Tip #4: Keep The Story Moving With Page Turns.

There are so many things I love about the picture book format, but I think my favorite is how effective page turns can be. Page turns aid in pacing and, when done effectively, help keep readers reading. Page turns can act as a cliffhanger, reveal something surprising, add humor, or create excitement or suspense. Use them to your advantage. When writing your picture book, consider the book map—what text will go on each page. Don’t forget to leave space for the title page, copyright info, etc.

Tip #5: You Are Not Beholden To Rhyme.

If you’re thinking that you should write your picture book in rhyme, don’t. If writing in rhyme doesn’t come naturally, please don’t try. What are some clues that your rhyme is not working? When sticking to the rhyme scheme dictates the plot of the book. When it feels forced, like when you awkwardly structure sentences simply to maintain the rhyme. Rhyme can also feel overused if you’re using a common rhyme scheme. All this said, if rhyming comes easily to you, by all means run with it. But there’s nothing that will make me close a book quicker (or, at the very least, groan audibly) than a book with an unnatural or forced rhyme.

These are five tips for picture book writing, but I could have written five hundred. I think the biggest thing that has helped me in my picture writing is to give up the idea of perfection—especially on the first draft. I’ve found that the more I write, the better my work becomes. So keep writing!

More About The Book

hockey picture book

The very first hockey practice can be a little scary, but not if you are planning to be the world’s greatest hockey superstar! Follow the action and relish the dreams of a confident young boy as he begins his journey to hockey stardom. See what happens at a hockey practice, learn about the excitement and fun of the game, and experience the lovable chaos of the ice arena. With humor and a little bit of attitude, A.L. Wegwerth has written a great introduction to the sport, while Alana McCarthy’s vivid style brings the game to life for future hockey stars.

Aimed at kids ages 3-7, the story was published by River Horse Books.

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More About A.L. Wegwerth

A.L. Wegwerth, AKA Amber Ross, writes books for kids that are filled with imagination, playfulness, and humor. She’s a product director by day, a hockey coach by night, a mom 24/7, and an author in the early morning (and whenever else she might fit it in).

Read my interview with A.L. Wegwerth on my Hockey Rivals Books blog.

Follow her on Twitter.

For more on children’s writing, check out this article on Writing a Christmas Book: A Guide for Children’s Book Authors.

 

 

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